Friday, February 20, 2015

Ocean Chapters 1 and 2

Here we are again! I must say, it should be obvious due to the nature of this blog, this post will contain spoilers. As a matter of fact, all my posts will contain spoilers! Beware if you are wanting to read the novel I am covering, which I strongly recommend. I received some great feedback about the content of the blog, mostly regarding the background. I previously had a photo that I borrowed from the default settings in Blogger. It seemed to compete with the text so I decided to just make the background a solid field of turquoise (teal?) because I would rather the focus be on the content of the blog instead of the pretty pictures.

Business aside, I would like to take a moment to talk about my decision to stick to one book to cover.

Firstly, I am in LOVE with this novel so far. I have finished reading about 5 chapters so far which is completely unlike me. I am the kind of person to rush my way through the journey because I find myself getting lost in the story. This is often to my downfall because then I put my book in priority over my school work and my poor husband. I agonized mulled over my decision to cover only one book at a time because I need to keep myself focused for this blog during what happens to be my most difficult semester yet. I have a pile of books on my nightstand begging to be read, but I will put them off until I finish this one.

Secondly, I decided to cover the novel chapter by chapter, rather than review the entire novel at once. I made this decision early on when planning this blog. I feel like jumping between books chapter by chapter will cause the blog to lose its focus.

Third - and last point, I promise! - I will try to do more than one chapter per post, just so I can get into the meat of the story. I'm impatient to finally tick this book off my Goodread's list!


Now! Follow me onward; onward to the ocean. The Ocean at the End of the Lane.

 
 


Chapter One

What Happens

Nobody came to my seventh birthday party.
 
Our main character is seven and celebrating a birthday alone. He got a cake with a book on it in icing, unusual for a young boy. He blew out the candles and ate a slice of his cake after it was obvious no one was to show, then opened a “pass-the-parcel” gift. He was happy to receive a Batman action figure, but still sad that no one showed up. He also received a Narnia box set and promptly lost himself in the stories.

Books were safer than people anyway.

 That evening he was presented with a tiny black kitten named Fluffy. This cat quickly became his best friend. It slept on his bed; he talked to it as though it would answer; Fluffy was his companion. He didn’t need to ask the other children why they did not go to his party. They were not his friends, just his classmates. The kitten was his friend.

One day he came home to a stranger in his kitchen. He was an opal miner from South Africa. He spoke in a clipped accent, unusual and brusque to the boy’s ears. He told the boy there was an accident but he disposed of the corpse. Not to worry, though, tit-for-tat, he bought the boy a replacement in a cardboard box. The boy opened the box and found a truculent ginger tomcat missing half an ear. He was mean and hissed at the boy. His name was Monster.

The boy went upstairs to his room and wept for the dead little kitten. He couldn’t talk to his parents about it because the debt had been repaid. A cat for a cat.

The damage had been made up.
 
Commentary
Oh. My. God. This has got to be one of the saddest chapters in a book that I have read in a long, long time. I teared up just writing my summary.

It is interesting that the first memory of our MC’s childhood that we see is a sad one. Does that say something about strength of emotion or what? The first memory he recalled while sitting by the “ocean” was that of death and loss. To a child, the concept of death is not often established as a concrete fact. They don’t realize the finality of it until it happens. This was the beginning of a life, the kitten, and just like that, all the possibilities in his future were snuffed out. Replaced by a Monster.

This chapter really puts the stark contrast between adult and child at the forefront of my mind.  No one showed up for his birthday, but life moves on. Open your presents. Eat your cake. Move on. A guest of the house kills your kitten. He gets you a cat. You move on. The damage has been made up. The child dared not cry to his parents about the kitten. He believed they wouldn’t understand. They would have been surprised, he believed, because he still had a cat. Not his Fluffy, but the debt had been paid.



Chapter Two

What Happens

I was not happy as a child, although from time to time I was content. I lived in books more than I lived anywhere else.

The family had to make some drastic changes due to economic hardship. The boy had to move into his sister’s room. He was sad because he could no longer leave the door of his room open to hear the comforting voices in conversation. He did like the fact that he could sleep next to a window in his sister’s bedroom though. He could climb out onto a brick balcony and sleep with the window open. His sister liked to argue about leaving the door open. They had to compromise and open or close it depending on the day.

His old bedroom was rented out to various people: a fat Austrian eccentric, a student from New Zealand, an American couple who – gasp! – were not married, and the opal miner from South Africa. The opal miner had given them each stones but the boy could not forgive him for his kitten’s death.

On the first day of spring holidays – three weeks of no school – the boy woke, expecting to receive his weekend copy of Smash! comics. His dad said he left it in the car but when the boy went out to get it, the car was not in the driveway. After speaking with the police, the boy’s father brought him to retrieve the car which had been located at the bottom of the lane.

When they reached the car, the father noticed there was something in the back seat. The boy looked back there expecting to see his Smash! comic, but instead he saw… him.

After visiting Madame Tussaud’s waxworks when he was younger, the boy recalled the almost-lifelike appearance of the wax bodies. The man laying in the back seat reminded him of that. The body looked like the opal miner but didn’t. He noticed the copy of Smash! under the body.

Quickly, the boy was moved aside by policemen and there was a bustle of activity in which he was mostly forgotten. A girl spoke to the police from behind him saying that she could watch over the boy. She was eleven and had short brown hair and freckles. She spoke in a very matter-of-fact way, stating she was sure he killed himself and would you like some milk from Bessie?

She brought him into the barn where an old woman was standing next to a cow. She demonstrated the milking apparatus and offered him a cup of warm fresh milk.

I remembered that milk after I had forgotten everything else.

The little girl’s name was Lettie Hempstock. They all went into the kitchen for porridge and jam and tea. The older woman and a stockier, younger woman started speaking to each other about the business outside. They had a precognitive sort of sense to their words, discussing how many people would end up being there and had the police found the note yet. They even discussed the contents of the note, extrapolating detailed information from just a few short sentences.

The older woman was Old Mrs. Hempstock, and the stocky woman was Mrs. Hempstock, and there was Lettie Hempstock as well. They discussed how the farm had been around since William the Conqueror and that it was in the Domesday Book. After a while, they suggested Lettie take the boy out to the pond – the ocean, Lettie insisted. There the boy asked why she called it an ocean. It was larger back then, Lettie explained, back when she came over from the old country. The boy was confused, but then noticed a fish in the water that distracted him.

The fish was dead, swallowed a sixpence. This was strange to Lettie Hempstock. She insisted the boy take it, but he didn’t think stores still took sixpence coins. She told him to put it in his piggy bank when he went home. When they went back to the farm, the boy’s father thanked the ladies for watching him and then brought him back. The boy had a question for his father.

“Could you have an ocean that was as small as a pond?”
“No,” said my father. “Ponds are pond-sized, lakes are lake-sized. Seas are seas and oceans are oceans. Atlantic, Pacific, Indian, Arctic. I think that’s all of the oceans there are.”

Commentary

Wow this chapter was hard to summarize. If you have not already read this book, do so NOW! I wanted to just quote the entire chapter. As a matter of fact, I will just place a quote here in my commentary, just because it is so beautifully and eerily written. I’m having a difficult condensing this novel into a short summary paragraph and small commentary. Neil Gaiman is a master of character development. We don’t even know our MC’s name and I already have a picture in my mind of a curious, quiet 7 year old boy. This book is packed full of prose and imagery.

This scene is when the boy is recalling Madame Tussaud’s waxworks.

…I had wanted to visit the Chamber of Horrors, expecting the movie-monster Chambers of Horrors I’d read about in my comics. I had wanted to thrill to waxworks of Dracula and Frankenstein’s Monster and the Wolf-man. Instead I was walked through a seemingly endless sequence of dioramas of unremarkable, glum-looking men and women who had murdered people – usually lodgers, and members of their own families – and who were then murdered in their turn: by hanging, by the electric chair, in gas chambers. Most of them were depicted with their victims in awkward, social situations – seated around a dinner table, perhaps, as their poisoned family members expired. The plaques that explained who they were also told me that the majority of them had murdered their families and sold the bodies to anatomy. It was then that the word anatomy garnered its own edge of horror for me. I did not know what anatomy was. I knew only that anatomy made people kill their children.

 

Next time I shall be covering chapters 3 and 4! Hope you return having read this beautiful tale!HHIHisieuebaifu



Saturday, February 7, 2015

The Ocean at the End of the Lane

Welcome to the very first post in my blog! I am very excited to start working through the first book in my line-up, The Ocean at the End of the Lane by Neil Gaiman. But before I do that, I'd like to write a little about myself.

My name is Danielle and I am a 25 year old senior at Arizona State University. I am married to a really incredible guy named Joey. He lets me get away with a lot. I am a big time gamer, playing on PS4, Xbox, and 3DSxl. I love to read and write, and I have finished the first draft to a few novels of my own. I am going to school to become an optometrist, however. I work as an optician currently and I wanted to stick in that field of healthcare. I have an adorable little ball of fluff named Polly, a 3 year old rescue Yorkie/Schnauzer.

I wanted to do this blog similarly to Leigh Butler's read-through blog on Tor.com. Her blog has given me endless hours of insightful thoughts regarding some of my favorite book series. I hope to delve more into stand-alone novels with this blog.

Anyways! On to the Good Stuff.

 
 
Prologue
 
What Happens
A man, our main character, travels English country in a stuffy black suit. He is reminiscing after a funeral of a character not yet known to the reader. He feels uncomfortable in the suit, but it gives him a piece of mind, as though preparing him for the day. He decides subconsciously to visit his home town in Sussex, a home that no longer existed. He drives and drives and finds his childhood memories coming to the surface. He remembers the house before he sees it coming around the next bend. The Hempstocks' farmhouse at the end of the lane. He walks in without really knowing why, and meets Mrs. Hempstock at the door. She isn't exactly how she appeared in his memory, doesn't remind him of who he thought he remembered. A thought comes to mind and he asks to see the duck pond. She is confused at first, until he mentions that it was called something different at the farmhouse - the sea? As he walks around the back, memories come unbidden to the surface. He is proud of himself, yet continues to test his memory. The ocean, that is what Lettie Hempstock had called it. And just like that, he remembers everything.
 
Commentary
"I remember my own childhood vividly... I knew terrible things. But I knew I mustn't let the adults know I knew. it would scare them."
 
The book begins with this eerily accurate quote. Children are so impressionable, always watching and absorbing the information around them. Their brains are like sponges and adults can't think the same way they can. It is interesting because the imagination is so much stronger, the younger a child is. As we age, our innocent view of the world is changed to a more logical - explained - fact of life. I love this quote and it gave me shivers the first time I read it out loud.
 
Out loud.
 
I am reading this book to my husband at nights. He doesn't read, but he likes when I share my interests with him. Reading a book out loud is so different than just speed reading through to get into a story. I love to get lost in a book, especially one written by the one and only Neil Gaiman. I honestly could have finished this 178 page book in a couple of hours, tops. I am trying to keep it slow, a chapter or two at night, so I can fully relish a brand new story from a master storyteller.
 
It is always interesting reading a book by Gaiman. He starts you out in a familiar landscape. In this case its a small town in England, but familiar enough for us to know that this is Present Day Earth. He leaks just enough, slowly enough, to get a hint of something supernatural.
 
"Can't drink the water from the sea, can you? Too salty. Like drinking life's blood. Do you remember the way? You can get to it around the side of the house. Just follow the path."
If you'd asked me an hour before, I would have said no. I did not remember the way. I do not even think I would have remembered Lettie Hempstock's name. But standing in that hallway, it was all coming back to me. Memories were waiting at the edges of things, beckoning to me. Had you told me I was seven again, I might have half-believed you, for a moment.
 
It is a form of magic, dragging up memory from the back of your mind. Like trying to look at a star, so you focus just next to it and it appears closer than if you tried to peer directly at it.
 
 
 
Until next time! Ta~
Danielle